Moonscape Comments

Incredibly intriguing my friend! 10/10

Freedom is a seascape, a landscape and a dreamscape, It all adds up to my intriguing moonscape. The poem is a beauty..................10

wonderful imagery make this poem really really great still hard to imagine angels play heavy metal band but everyone have their wishing rod to catch happiness, knocking out sadness, for a better life enjoy to read it more and more thanks for sharing

so long and classical ventures yuk, .. baby child sleeps under his mom s venture seas are nt the slaves of tides great...

Marvellous images come to mind.Great piece.

loved the poem very much, , , , , angels playing in a heavy metal band, , , , , what an imagination, , , , hats off, ,

Truly an emotional journey.........with so many thoughts tucked inside the soul-many passions do speak of loss........but the wish to go ahead remains strong..........long like this moonscape.Liked it.

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nice imaginary poem love the whole poem totally awesome

Still full of excellent imagery You are like James Joyce. ha ha

Poetic thoughts go awry.It has some apt and beautiful metaphors like 'wishing rod', 'spears' and 'turbulent rivers'. And a philosophical write no doubt

Dear frnd. you have done a lot within a short span. but you have to do more and more without caring who is reading your poem or not.. in the last stanza you have written I have..........loss. indeed it shows your efficiency and brilliancy and your vision. keep it up my frnd. you r never late. touch the sky and go ahead.. after ur routine job devote for poetry only.

I loved the long lines style in this piece of yours to start with. The rhythm is quite remarkable especially the rhymes inside the lines. there are certain emotional lines which compels one to stop and think for a while. This was a joy to read.

Many lovely lines, some great descriptions and imagery - an excellent read Hazel.

The culmination is here: Freedom is a seascape, a landscape and a dreamscape, It all adds up to my intriguing moonscape. i liked the words carrying rich images! ! !

Great imagery Just mooning around Lovely construction and playful thoughts in your moonscape BB : O))

You have great imagery in this poem. It rhymes well and it flows smoothly too.

Great images displayed in this poem. I really enjoyed this read.