Saturday, March 16, 2019

Moon's Plea Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was deprived of inner light from the very start
The poor moon was never endowed its own spark.
It needs a sun to glow
For its love to show
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Nadeem Ishaque
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COMMENTS
M Asim Nehal 09 April 2019

Nicely penned. I liked the flow and the vocab.

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Nosheen Irfan 16 March 2019

I love how you have played with rhyme here. A truly musical piece. Beautifully penned. I'm sure it will make the moon happy.

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