Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Monday, November 26, 2012

Moonlit Night Just Turns Me On Comments

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Moonlit night just turns me on
Give me bliss more than a ton
Stare at my eyes see inside
Let's ride on dream for joyride
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So Close 26 November 2012

lovely poem, i do enjoy a lot...! good work »so close«

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Hazel Durham 26 November 2012

Lovely imagery with great passion, great write!

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Owain Glyn 26 November 2012

It's fine, keep at it

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Mohammed Albalushi 26 November 2012

lovely poem with smart use of words, well done ]]]]

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Tunji Ibrahim 26 November 2012

A simple, smooth-flowing diction pregnant with beautiful images to conjure up the right pictures of love charms in the mind's eye of the reader.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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