Friday, January 29, 2016

Moonlit Love Comments

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A pale luminosity, the moon
Let's gaze at it, unblinking,
Standing hand in hand, in bliss
Till it wanes, till our bones ache
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Nosheen Irfan
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Edward Kofi Louis 08 August 2016

A silvery fullness of love! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 19 February 2016

Excellent imagery and lovely composition. a mesmerizing sight that could two lovers fall for each other. What beautiful thought from a beautiful mind. Enjoyed every word. You have your own way of writing such beautiful words full of love and devotion.

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Valsa George 07 February 2016

You, me and the moon...... the trio has drawn a magical circle! An exalted form of love! Enjoyed!

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Abhilasha Bhatt 29 January 2016

Beautiful poem....loved it....thank you for sharing :)

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 29 January 2016

Lets surrender our hearts under its watchful eye-beautiful.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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