A pale luminosity, the moon
Let's gaze at it, unblinking,
Standing hand in hand, in bliss
Till it wanes, till our bones ache
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Excellent imagery and lovely composition. a mesmerizing sight that could two lovers fall for each other. What beautiful thought from a beautiful mind. Enjoyed every word. You have your own way of writing such beautiful words full of love and devotion.
You, me and the moon...... the trio has drawn a magical circle! An exalted form of love! Enjoyed!
Lets surrender our hearts under its watchful eye-beautiful.
A silvery fullness of love! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.