Moonlit Face Comments

Quite alluring title...... :)

A good attempt in the chapter of love, Baharak. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Your poem is so suffused with feeling it needs few words. In fact, additional words would only distract from the poem's purpose which is to show gratitude, not talk about it, but to let it shine in its own glory, just like the Moonlit Face which shines over the poem just by being named. Of course, there is an unstated but obvious point being made: You will be soon walking down the way you have found. But that will the subject of future poems!