Thursday, September 13, 2012

Moonlit Chambers Bath, Portrait Poems Comments

Rating: 2.3

Envisioning rapture, Venusian stance
reflecting window gardens evening trance
solitary beauty weaves midnight path
pouring innocence in moonlit chambers bath.
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Captain Cur
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True triumph of all times for all discerning mind. A narrative on a realistic happening across your eventful life. A good piece dear Captain Cur

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 30 September 2012

Dear Captain, from the mad and dangerous sea, you have came up with a great gem, it is called a brilliant gem. Great poem captain.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 September 2012

A combination of allegory n romance as if romanticizin nature or vice verse. Awesome! Do read me but no pressure to coment.

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

amazing... unique...

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Eric Cockrell 16 September 2012

really good flow and rhythm.... love your imagery!

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Unwritten Soul 14 September 2012

Dew of moonlit kiss blazoning the skin upon whom watching that spherical beauty...Inspired a poem that was written in delicate and beautiful artistry..really nice captain_Unwritten Soul

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