Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Moonlit Calm Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a moonlit calmed evening shore,
a breeze wafting over the moon's
rosy haze and traffic noise fading
to a muted roar there
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Sara Militello
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Kim Barney 11 November 2016

The poet's notes helped clarify what was going on in the poem. An incredible experience, to b sure.

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M Asim Nehal 07 October 2015

Superb poetry....................I enjoyed it.........10 on 10.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2015

I waited for the night to reclaim its calm, then for the morning's uncertain glow to become a bright your struggles, your fears and the final joy and peace in the morning. you have done well to write and to articulate your feelings with chosen words. thank you dear poetess

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Chinedu Dike 16 September 2014

Indeed, you really captured the essence of your experience, and that's what separates a good poem from the mediocre one. The words were carefully chosen. The sentences well articulated. Overall, a beautiful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 27 August 2014

The imagery was so beautifully painted here :) _Soul

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 August 2014

I appreciate your dedication to write this poem love the nature challenge the life lest life challenge you bravo

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Sara Militello

Sara Militello

Tampa, Florida
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