On a moonlit calmed evening shore,
a breeze wafting over the moon's
rosy haze and traffic noise fading
to a muted roar there
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Superb poetry....................I enjoyed it.........10 on 10.
I waited for the night to reclaim its calm, then for the morning's uncertain glow to become a bright your struggles, your fears and the final joy and peace in the morning. you have done well to write and to articulate your feelings with chosen words. thank you dear poetess
Indeed, you really captured the essence of your experience, and that's what separates a good poem from the mediocre one. The words were carefully chosen. The sentences well articulated. Overall, a beautiful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.
I appreciate your dedication to write this poem love the nature challenge the life lest life challenge you bravo
The poet's notes helped clarify what was going on in the poem. An incredible experience, to b sure.