Thursday, September 11, 2008

Moonlight Walk Comments

Rating: 4.8

As I go out for a moonlit walk
I wonder to myself why do I talk?
Even through my wondering eyes
I see the ocean spread across the skies.
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Grace Gordon
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purple moon 07 November 2008

Precisely, couldn't agree more. Nice work.x.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 September 2008

great imagery....tuned and toned with right words.......your writings are matured than your age dear..Keep writing....good luck....my heartfelt 10

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Emily Oldham 14 September 2008

Great poem... I love moonlight, but i can never go out and look at the 'scape because we live in a city: (. But you've brought the joys of a moonlit walk to me! :) Athena xx

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**Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man 11 September 2008

some times i too would like someone to see the 'scape as i in all it's magnifacent beauty and colors, i just get lost in the clouds in the sky. love the poem grace.

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