Moonlight Of My House-Chandni Comments

ok, PH 'says' i sent the last one, but not the first three! ! ! : (: ( i'll try to remember to check later today or tomorrow. to MyPoemList, and into Sept.2018 showcase, my good man. bri :)

there SHOULD BE 3 'partial comments' from me showing up soon on this page. where ARE THEY! ! ? I hope it is only because PH is taking a break from working! ! ! : ( bri ;)

(cont.) some favorite lines: No excuses, No arguments, What ever may be cost, What ever may be time, BUT, in last stanza, why use him, not her? ..... in honor of your grandchild (grandchild) ? ? bri :)

(cont.) your youngest grand daughter.....(i'm used to using granddaughter or grandson) ... has a request? so does Bri; get twice as much [make that 3 TIMES as much] as you planned to! NOW! ! i'll be there to eat it with her. (CONT.)

i plan to use this in September's showcase, which will highlight poems of PH members of the Indian subcontinent. Akhtar, do you have, or would you write a version in your 'native language'? ? ? please send a message if you would/will. i would put it into showcase as well, if you do. of course, if you DON'T i WON'T! ! to MyPoemList. (cont.)

So beautiful.......................................................................................

What an expression of love for a granddaughter.............................

so lovely so cute. What a write!

Absolutely wonderful! .......

I wish best for your grand-daughter whom you love so much. I pray she shines like soothing moon always, thanks for sharing :)

comparing her to moonlight, a wondrous expression of love from grandpa!