Saturday, May 24, 2008

Moonlight Night Comments

Rating: 3.5

On a moonlit night,
by candlelight,
when the veil is its most thin,
My soul reaches out to those gone before,
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Isabella Swan
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Greenwolfe 1962 27 August 2008

Someone gave this a one. Probably the 'ones monster'. So I gave it a ten. Not to balance it out. But because it is a 10. GW62

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William Jackson 24 May 2008

Great poem. I especially like the end rhyme of the first three lines.

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Isabella Swan

Isabella Swan

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