Moonlight Mouse Comments

Moonlight Mouse, adorable poem, most adorable mouse!

This little poem conjures up such amazing visions for me!

I have enjoyed your excellent metaphored poem. Loveliest with bit of humor.

In Vinhie's song was involved tha snow, beacuse we just had snow so huge to play with and the more. What clever was that he uses the theme of snow in his song. The tune he created also. That poem is still circling on PH, I think

since I am proud that he has sung this song in his nursery class, I have got the video from his nursery teacher, she was also proud of the little boy. His theme was also about a mouse but versus a big crocodile, but this mouse was afraid and ran away!

Last week, or more days ago, I submitted here on PH a self created song sung by my eldest grandson,3 years old,

Beautiful allegory. Yes we all are mouse but when it comes to our life this very mouse becomes lion and even dragon. Beautiful sir.

Such a nice poem, Donald R. W. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.