Sunday, December 25, 2016

Moonlight In The Desert Comments

Rating: 5.0

'I want to shake the sadness
in the strands of my heart
for in this vast and lonely desert
it is your presence I desire
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Bharati Nayak 27 December 2016

my heart sways to the winds with a silent whisper to my horse that we can reached an oasis where trees and flowers grows and we will overcome this desert of tears hardships and sacrifices.' - - - - - - - - - - - - -A beautiful poem.with smooth flow of words.The poem ends with a positive note that the hardships will be overcome and we will reach our destination.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 27 December 2016

Thank you Ms Bharati Nayak for a very nice comment, really appreciate this a lot.

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