Thursday, November 30, 2017

Moonlight In Late November Comments

Rating: 5.0

for Baharak

Moonlight spreads across the landscape
and covers everything it touches in its path
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Daniel Brick
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Nosheen Irfan 11 December 2017

The beauty of the moonlit night captured vividly n artistically. Who wouldn't want to take a walk in this moon-filled night? You have set the tone for dreaming. Nothing will resist this unfolding of light. We all are drawn to the energy of moon unintentionally. A quiet force, thousands of miles away, yet reaching out to us n awakening dreams n fantasies. A big 10.

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Galina Italyanskaya 07 December 2017

I've found this on the Internet: Baharak is also a female name in Persian language which translates to little spring (implying youth) . It's a lovely poem, touching my heart. A dreamer among dreamers - how many of them are there in our world?

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Savita Tyagi 03 December 2017

But our guardian is content to be a dreamer among dreamer. I will remember those lines as effect of moonlight. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

Moonlight covers everything it touches in its path. Moon's bounty and beauty motivate dreamers brilliantly and powerfully. Moon grants higher dreams. Moon carries calmness. A nice imagery of Late November is beautifully expressed in this excellent poem with wisdom and fantasy.10

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Bill Cantrell 30 November 2017

A wonderful poem as usual Daniel, the moon is forgiving when it's soft light conceals our flaws, great poetry my friend!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 November 2017

Such a heartwarming write, Daniel... a perfect 10👍👍👍

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