Thursday, October 25, 2007

Moonlight Gardening Comments

Rating: 3.5

Obscured by clouds
a hidden Orion

listens to your
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Dónall Dempsey
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Ruth Walters 28 October 2009

no moonlight.....very sad......makes my throat tighten Ruthie

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Gina Pisapia 28 October 2007

Oh this is so sad! Beautiful observation and so well written that it creeps up on you slowly and then cuts to the bone. Wonderful poem but such..grief! love Gina XXX

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Dee Dee Wright 26 October 2007

This is just beautifully handled and so well writen and so...sad! The imagery is astounding and clutches one's soul. The as above so below thing with flowers and stars is superb. And when the realisation dawns on why...wow...that sends it into another dimension. Great writing! love dee dee

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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