Sunday, June 24, 2007

Moonlight & Fireflies Comments

Rating: 5.0

Midnight blue sky twinkles with stars of love
The moon shines bright like a virgin dove
The field blinks continually with green light
And the silence brings a peaceful night
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Patricia Gale
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Tailor Bell 27 June 2007

breathtaking beauty, pure and lifting, carries one away into deep elegance. joy to read and imagine. exquisite work, Patricia. -Tailor

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Theodora Onken 24 June 2007

Well, Patricia it is about time, some more of your great talent appears upon these pages. I love this warm and seductive write...takes me back to a much earlier time and place! Blessings, dear one, Theo

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Charles M Moore 24 June 2007

Brilliant title and romantic as ever, One of your best, enjoyed every line.

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Lorena Walker 24 June 2007

Nice poem... i love the imagery!

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