MOONLIGHT FANTASY
One happy summer late in June
I walked under a starry night.
I started talking with the Moon,
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(cont.) favorite lines: Deciding not to vainly linger I instantly of love forgot. My Fantasies faded at once. as for dunce, i think i used that to refer to 'me' in one of my recent poems OR in a message to a PH friend, OR both: a poem TO a PH friend in a message. yes, once does not have many words (that i can think of) with which to rhyme! i wonder if this is pure fantasy or based on some of your true feelings or activities. hmm? bri ;)
Dear Brian, Thank you very much for the comment. It is both my feelings and fantasy. I see the Moon (full Moon - She) from my window nearly every night in good weather all yer through. And sometimes half Moon (Young Moon - He) . I do not remember exactly, but it seem you who offered me the rhyme dunce to once. For which I'm indebted to you.
i like the poem and thanks for the Poet's Notes. these 2 lines: Because She wasn't free, She told. Young Moon was guiding her all month. .......cause me to ask 3 questions: 1- is She the Moon? 2- who/what is the Young Moon? 3- who is her? to MyPoemList (cont.)
Ah, once again I am reminded my good Russian PH friend who I have not heard from in years. I suspect that he died. I hope & think that, IF dead now, Val found relief in 'death'. : ) He lived in Moscow.