Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Moonlight Faerie Comments

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I can't see the stars from here...
Please don't tell me that I am a stranger
As I fall deeper, your questions are clear.
The ones you chase with fire.
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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski
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Patricia Grantham 07 September 2013

A beautiful and emotional write coming from a youthful lass as yourself. Moonlight Faerie, Starstruck Mary. Nicely written.

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Thomas Hsi 22 September 2012

You certainly do not write like a typical 16 year old. You are wise beyond your years. Your poem is haunting yet full of charm. Write on!

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John Raubenheimer 24 August 2012

Tiffany I love the way this poem develops, effortlessly and simply. The last three lines are beautiful. The last line especially.

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Phoebe Lichten 22 August 2012

I love the night! Faeries in the moonlight, enchanting poem. Nice job!

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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Springfield, MA
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