I can't see the stars from here...
Please don't tell me that I am a stranger
As I fall deeper, your questions are clear.
The ones you chase with fire.
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You certainly do not write like a typical 16 year old. You are wise beyond your years. Your poem is haunting yet full of charm. Write on!
Tiffany I love the way this poem develops, effortlessly and simply. The last three lines are beautiful. The last line especially.
I love the night! Faeries in the moonlight, enchanting poem. Nice job!
A beautiful and emotional write coming from a youthful lass as yourself. Moonlight Faerie, Starstruck Mary. Nicely written.