Tuesday, July 20, 2010

~~ Moonlight Dreams ~~ Comments

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Soft light shimmers on the darkened walls.
White iridescent streams of brightness
cascade across the bed
blending with the shadows.
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Mari Martin
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Dale Mullock 21 July 2010

Hi Mari.... And here it is a brand spanking new Moonlight Dreams... and yes I do think you fulfil those dreams that lie in the minds of sleepers and night owls alike in this wonderful poem. As I said before love the white sheen with multi-coloured pearl essence dancing on moonbeams that glint across the opals... you have added a subtle and yet vivid image of the night and all it sparkling charm and its underlying grime all in one foul swoop. I think you will find that we all wish we were bathing in those argent moonbeams and embracing the night you so wonderfully describe here. Well done for the updat and I noticed that all the previous comments have disappeared... Hope I haven't caused you too many problems! Great write, keep it up! Dale :)

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