Sunday, August 12, 2007

Moonlight Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

As night time arrives a gentle breeze begins to blow
Stars that have hid all day suddenly begin to glow
A bashful moon creeps slowly into view
Rising higher in the night sky as it slowly changes its hue
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COMMENTS
Lillian J. 10 March 2008

This is very nice, the descriptive diction brings your words alive! Lilly :)

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Denise F. 12 August 2007

this is a very lovely poem...you paint a wonderful picture with your words..very good: -)

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