Thursday, May 26, 2005

Moonlight Comments

Rating: 4.7

Standing on the corner,
He whistles at the girls,
He sticks his left thumb in his belt
And with his right he twirls
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Linda Hepner
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David Zvekic 26 May 2005

The rhyme of this poem is elegant and easy to follow, although the meter is slightly irregular. The imagery is very strong, however I feel the poem becomes confusing when the horses are introduced. Is that a metaphore? I didn't understand then poems ending.

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