Moonlight Comments

This is a very soothing one to read.. nice indeed Vaibhav, .. I m never being good at short and concise.. This is short, yet great.... love shan

Young man you make me feel like retiring my pen...

The magic and music of the night and moon inspired by an exquisite emotion from the depth of your heart.Good poetry cleverly uses words, excellent poetry does the same but goes somewhere beyond words, into the profoundity of the soul, too, like yours. Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Vaibhav. A.

wow......short and peaceful....thank you.

This is not lengthy, yet really thoughtful. I think it's great that you associated the moonlight with struggling love. I visualize myself having had yet another late night fight with my spouse/lover and taking a long night time walk to clear my head, only to realize that despite the stress I only love the person more. This is a great write.

In a short verse like this one, it is hard to get a correct title. I prefer DAMPENED LOVE. I think that is what the poem is about, rather than MOONLIGHT. Just a thought. GW62

Beautiful Moonlight! 10! -Raj Nandy

Visual expression in just the right length. A fine poem.

Nicely penned my friend such a comforting piece of amazing visual verse. Keep expressing 10+ Jon

wow.... so calm and reassuring.... wonderful poem. beautifully expressed. Thank you.

moonlight still reminds the love as when it enligtens heart by mystery, nicely wrought ingenious,10+, thanks for sharing

a nice one nothing can stall love

Good

Very nice short poem.

Short and to the point

Vaibhav, this is so good, so good, so goodly good - crawling moonlight, venturing heart, dampened love refuses to cease. Yes, that's the love of life, venturing still, even if dampened, just won't quit. great love made greater in venturing.10 from me

it takes more than a dampening to subdue the questin heart

So much said and such detail in so few words great piece 10

nice imagery you used here..A wonderful treat for me. thank you, Vaibhav

moonglow, at times, is a consoling and soothing caress after an unsuccessful amorous venture.