Moonlight Comments

Heartfelt love poem with beautiful eloquence and emotions. Lovely piece nicely put together. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Great.........up to this little (yet significant) typo: that are that our true feelings were showing.............you of course meant our true.. btw, in your comments, below: don't get involved with The Crow. i would stay away from him. i say that from past experience on PH (with him) . this is not a very detailed critique, but it will suffice for now. i like the poem and have to remind myself that you are being a poet and NOT (necessarily) typing a diary entry about your young life. of course, this COULD be about YOU! =================== Watch Out For Love Some young love does last. Some couples, to it, hold fast. Passion often cools after a bit. Don't forget to put a condom on it! =================== i guess i 'need' to finish reading the poem! oh, i already did. i especially like the last rhyme: forever/Never to MyPoemList it goes. very nice, Crys. bri :)

Hi Chryssa, Beautiful. Another poem on love, love and LOVE! Those who have experienced the magic of love only can understand what moonlight means to lovers; what she murmurs in their ears, ever so softly...ever so passionately... The moonlight was our guiding light, and it was passion we were trying to fight. Loved reading... A mighty 100+ and onto mypoemlist..

What a lovely poem about Love. Well Done, Crystal! So vivid, it makes the reader almost feel that they are viewers, like watching a good film.

Beautiful lines...I felt like the world had stopped for us..+++10