Moonlight Comments
how mighty you are
i was kneeling to pray before you came
but now i need no praying nor blessing, you draw the earth to her knees every night
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BUT what of the overcast nights when no moonlight shines on you? ? back to praying and candles i guess. how a daytime moon sightings? ? to MyPoemList. bri ;)
your breezy breath makes our doubtful heart so warm. _lovely poem with beautiful topic.
but now i need no praying nor blessing, you draw the earth to her knees every night but now i need no candles nor torch, you draw our souls to the sacred light every night just beautifully thought of none has ever before not even I GREAT POETRY LADY
Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Lovely indeed. Thanks for sharing.
beautiful write Baharak.. I can feel the strong connection with you and God.
you draw our souls to the sacred light every night liked this verse in your poem very very much in the context of what you wrote before........ i was going to pray before u came......... lovely... thank you very much dear poetess. tony
This is a splendid poem of the Spiritual intervening into our material lives and raising them to to the condition of the Spirit. Twice you are about to light a tiny material light when the Moon showers you in her radiance.So powerful is the Moon's SACRED LIGHT that being with in radiance is equal to prayer! That is a remarkable statement of faith. And the glory of the moon rescues us from the experience of Nothingness that assails so many modern people who cannot find the spiritual in the material and have lost track of the Sacred Path. This poem's beauty of language equals its truth of meaning! ! !
such humble pray and praising of natural most light.. as soothing as moonlight. thank you for sharing! ! 10+++
A beautiful Poem by a very humble heart and sweet Person! thank you for sharing 10+++! !
A beautiful poem speaks about heart Baharak Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Baharak Barzin, you draw the earth to her knees every night how beautiful! glory behind the skies.......... this poem is so lovely. I have enjoyed many a night of moonlit magic myself. Perfectly written. blessings to you Kathy
This is one of the most beautiful poems on moon. The flow, the concept and feeling it gives is really amazing. Much love.
how generous you are i was making my candles before you came but now i need no candles nor torch, you draw our souls to the sacred light every night your breezy breath makes our doubtful heart so warm - - - - - - - - - - -A blissful feeling sweeps you.Thank you for sharing a beautiful poem.
I like the movement in each of the three-line stanzas, that is, you are preparing a particular worship of God - kneeling in prayer, making candles - but then the immediate presence of God is made manifest and that makes further effort unnecessary as the divine presence fills the space with glory. And if I'm reading properly, you don't have to DO ANYTHING, just show gratitude. God has scaled down the sheer power of his presence so that a human being can not only endure it but delight in it. I'm assuming that moonlight is a metaphor for this presence. , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
first i should thank you for spending your time and thoughts on my poem and yes you are right moonlight is a metaphor for presence of God and i was wondering how you could get the meaning effortlessly. I appreciate it. xxx
And so it was, Into their heart's, he came. To those on knee, made rise. Verily on candles, was this said. Mother's day, Grown dark and save them for your selves. For in night, It's made for rest and day will be here soon. Come and celebrate and night was gone.. iip
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i'll now use this in my May 2019 Showcase, found in my list of PH poems. Thanks. bri :)