Friday, September 27, 2013

Moonlight Comments

Rating: 4.8

A faint shadow, a round lantern.
A distant sphere, posing in the sky.
As Darkness covers us in her veil,
Lights out, and good night.
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Cassandra Jasmine
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Yasmin Khan 07 October 2013

Your dear companion is moon and it's a nice tribute to her, mature writing as compare to your age

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Marvin Brato 06 October 2013

Under the moonlight we can indulge in reflective mood, its when we realized how wonderful life is!

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Khairul Ahsan 28 September 2013

A nice poem. 'She thinks of her dogs, snuggled in bed. Her parents, discoursing downstairs. Her brother, snoring gently next door, And the moon; her nighttime companion. Liked it.

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Abhishek Mishra 27 September 2013

wonderful poem indeed..though you are not that old but your writing is mature..too good: -)

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