Moonleaves Comments

Beautifully penned Pia. Truly deep and heartfelt. Thank you

longing for the soil that once was mine. I am here, but my life is not with me. you are becoming philosophical. soul and body and the feeling of its absence in certain moments in life. you are describing this rare feeling now. thank you

this poe is as good as your other poems..means you are really a good poet with rich ideas, , , and meaningful way of writing..well done..10/10

You are certainly one of the best here or anywhere. This is pure imagery, unadulterated imagery. This is what is called as 'Bhavukatha' in Sanskrit. Very very very good and great.

metaphysical and great

this poem is melancholy. Its beautiful though, like the six previous poems I have read so far. You have an eloquence all your own way. I appreciate your poems. I can feel their gentleness and and it soothes me. Your poems, as simple as they are, have so much to them and have much more quality than all the other poets I have read here at Poemhunter. I will continue to read your poems and your poems will definitely be added to my favorites, and if the favorite poets option is available, I will add you there too. I don't say this to flatter you. I am sincerely impressed by your poetry, and thanks for reading mine. - Chase

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The setting causing the mood and the transient emotion create the effect.

I can always appreciate a poem that has an association with the 'moon'. It puts a sereal feel and texture to your seasonal references.

This smacks of beauty latching in life that lies beneath and beyond moonleaves tossed in the cover of darkness green., i do appreciate

hey! you have a way with words!

Lovely work. The title is especially enchanting. Kindest regards, Sandra

hey i like this one

Pia, In the words of the street poets ' I feel you'. Life death and lingering. at least to me thanks for the great read Tony D.

I love the dichotomy of opposites you've expressed here, and the language you've used to express such opposing thoughts. Shane

Heartfelt thoughts, a touch of sadness oozing through--Lovely poem Pia-----Melvina

'Moonlit brings sadness covers by moonleaves and the fragile soul seeks her fading lands.'

A shade within the shade, but hang on in there, I can see the sun just edgeing its way around the corner, This is a deep poem, full of heartfelt emotion Very well written Love duncan X

I loved this poem... but felt there is a tinge of sadness. It's very well written though. Full ratings to you on this.

This is a wonderful expression Pia~