Friday, June 15, 2007

Moonglow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Did you see the moon tonight
Hanging 'tween the trees?
Blazing in her splendor bright
She kissed the evening breeze;
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Linda Ori
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Not a member No 4 24 June 2007

Serenity reigns! That moon 'hanging 'tween the trees' was as fresh and real as I might have seen out in the countryside. I'm with Alison in that your rhythm, rhyme, fluidity is as good as it gets! ! Loved this. jim xxx

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Alison Cassidy 23 June 2007

Your are one of those poets who must have been born with the rhyming gene Linda. Your pieces have a satisfying pulse to them with scantion that is always spot on. That, coupled with such interesting and original images makes this a jewel of a poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Ted Sheridan 16 June 2007

I've never been big on wishes but your rubbed my bottle just right with this one... so

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Splendor & grande imagery...but, ahemmmmm...It is you know...the M A N in da' Moon....not the Woman, that is unless you were attempting to express it as Wooooo, man...whatta Moon it is tonight! lol! Midnight...much delight, i all that you write...Don't ever stop! FjR

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R H 15 June 2007

Enchanting Linda, love it! Justine

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Oh Linda... I feel as though I am part of a secret, on reading this. Let your dreams and wishes and hopes come true.... this is glorious to read. t x

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Leonard Daranjo 15 June 2007

Interesting imagination. Great lilt.

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