Moonflower Comments

Your words are glowing in my heart-light like the flower in this poem and the flower on my trellis...well done!

william, this is a lovely delicate poem like the flowers and how the bees work on them. keep on your lovely write.

wow! This was so sensual and amazingly romantic. Just delicious William. Thanks for the read.: o) Bj

The conceit unfolds elegantly and beautifully.

Lovely language. The imagery - the solar bee - the twilight - the moonflower - blends the lights beautifully. Strong all the way through.

I really like this poem...it's really delicate and to the point...

very beautiful Trisha

This sensual dance of attraction...bees to honey....are all woven into this delicious poem William.

A beautiful poem William - I read it 3 times! Sensual, gentle and unreservedly romantic. Loved it. Kind regards, Justine.

Rich imagery, very sensual and elegant. Loved it.

William J., this poem is absolutely beautiful and i like the rhythm.10 for you.

at the end the words flowed like a flower blooming. how did you do that? its great!

How my heart did sigh from the reading of your words. Very Nice, I enjoyed. A romantic indeed.

Such a nice, peaceful and relaxing reflection WJ. I find it comforting. Nature is bliss when undisturbed.

You do have a way with wild flowers WJ. On the botton 10 from Tai