Wednesday, December 7, 2005

Moondust Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moondust left where ere you walk
Lights a darkened path
The laughter echo that you leave
Is lovings aftermath
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Bill Smith
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Cj Heck 07 December 2005

This is lovely, Bill. I enjoy reading work by a man who isn't afraid to show his tender side. Again, lovely. Warmest regards, CJ

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Ernestine Northover 07 December 2005

Hey that's a beaut, Bill, what a lovely flowing and moving poem. It left me with a feeling of pleasure at your write. Thanks. Love Ernestine XXX

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