Thursday, October 24, 2013
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Rating: ★5.0
A kid I was when on way to school I caught her pretty face
Fell for her can’t call it love the sweet girl in school dress
She stood on her door a beauty of yore waiting for the bus
My limbs went limp grew butterfly wings she was my childhood crush.
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Wahab Abdul
24 October 2013
the poem has a marvellous flow.. a good theme to write on...10 marks...i love it
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9/4/2025 11:56:55 AM # 1.0.0
Romantic and full of charm. Lovely rhymes, especially 'A petite white dove radiating precious love'. She was very special. Another original poem, Pradip.