Most beautiful vision my eyes could behold
Opens before me, like a flower unfolds
Offers me kindness, a pollen so pure
Nectar of love and sorrows one cure
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Ok this is one of the best I've read for some time, works both at a universal and individual level and unfolds as you read it with a most delightful soft landing at the end, yep I like it very much, many thanks D&G, love from David
your poem is beautiful, every line is beautiful and filled with soothing words