Monday, April 23, 2007

Moonchild Dreamer Comments

Rating: 4.4

Most beautiful vision my eyes could behold
Opens before me, like a flower unfolds
Offers me kindness, a pollen so pure
Nectar of love and sorrows one cure
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RyuOh Kenshin 29 June 2007

your poem is beautiful, every line is beautiful and filled with soothing words

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Changing Sky 07 May 2007

Such a beautiful poem... and I love the last line.

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David Taylor 23 April 2007

Ok this is one of the best I've read for some time, works both at a universal and individual level and unfolds as you read it with a most delightful soft landing at the end, yep I like it very much, many thanks D&G, love from David

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