I thought about viewing the moon last night,
Full and heavy as it hung in the sky,
But this year as the rice ripens
And the wind picks up
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Again Ever so beautifully written! .. Ever such heart and soul! .. Again 5 STARS! .....+++++ And again awesome ending! ..
... bend around you unabsorbed—nice, Suzanne. And I wonder, as I’m nearly done reading it myself, whether My Stroke of Insight is subtext for this poem. Have I ever mentioned or have you seen this little poem— Barn’s burned down. Now I can see the moon. Glen
Hi Glen, No, you haven't mentioned that poem. Is it yours? It sounds very much like something a zen monk would write!
WOW! Especially the Truth in the last 4 lines! Brilliant!
Incredibly Awesome! ! ! ! ! Ever So Beautifully Done! ! ! ! ! Powerfully Felt Inside! ! ! ! ! Love The Ending! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++++++ another saved :)
Beautiful written poem Suzanne Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
Heavy sadness gives agony in mind and anxiety remains within. Carrying the scent of death is so sad. The world may rage in chaos. Swirling eternal truth is wise ever. Having trust on God and realizing truth about life we can gain peace in mind. Brilliantly penned poem is shared here...10
Yes, we can only get peace by complete submission! Wonderful poem... poignant expression finds its justification from the specific dimension..a brilliant poem!