Wednesday, December 7, 2016

Moon, Stars And People Comments

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Bella Luna in the sky what makes you diff'rent from others?
Jealous of your refulgence are the stars and all that glitters
Wishful and happy, staring at you, the dreamers and lovers
Grateful for your light, are those in the land and in the waters
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Christopher Tye 14 December 2016

Really nice poem, a night sky full of stars is a beautiful thing to behold.

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Liza Sudina 09 December 2016

your little sparks create big impacts in people's hearts It came from the One who imagined them - a DEEP, WISE poem!

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Kim Barney 08 December 2016

Very nice. I like the use of Luna, the Spanish word for moon, in the first line. Bella Luna = beautiful moon.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 December 2016

You shine in words and actions, you have feelings and emotions... Nice words..... People are like moon and stars that have different degree of gleams.... This poem reminds me of the song DESERT MOON popularized by DENNIS DE YOUNG of the STYX.....

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