Moon Song Comments
I looked into the eyes of the moon
and he smiled,
and said,
go soon
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Hi Sally, I couldn't leave a comment for Summer Shade which I thought was brilliant with sun moving through the day and you caught out by the suns rays... superb penning! However i then found this one! This has almost a child like glee and yet sombre and sorrowful twist to it. Love the quick rhyme and flow that only lets you pause on the moon line and his thoughts... really well thought out and simple in delivery but so breath taking and emotive. I love your style Sally, keep up these wonderful ditties of yours! Dale :)
This is beautiful Sally...touches the heart. Moon madness, moon sadness. N
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8/13/2025 3:17:11 AM # 1.0.0
How fascinating and enjoyable. Try mine -On The Horns of The Moon - Adeline
I really appreciate your lovely comment.