Saturday, November 14, 2020

Moon Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

One of his favorite moments
in all the memories he's compiling
is when he walks in the early morning
and it seems, to him, the moon is smiling.
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Jim Yerman
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Khairul Ahsan 14 November 2020

A beautiful poem that uplifts the mood of the reader and whatever mental state he is in, should bring a lovely smile to his face. To me, the last to stanzas are particularly soothing and their appeal lingers on. The poem, so well written, deserves full marks and I gladly give it: 5 Stars *****! I recommend this poem to be selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day' for any day soon.

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