Sunday, June 4, 2017

Moon Shy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark clouds racing across the sky.
True love began to fly.
In a love nest so dry.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2017

It is a beautiful poem on love having stunning expression and nice collocation. The last stanza is more attractive... The day turned into a night so crisp and cold. A million stars dotted the sky. On my sweetheart and I they did spy. While the moon seemed shy. Thanks for sharing. Full vote.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 August 2017

So dry! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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