Monday, August 22, 2016

Moon's Music Comments

Rating: 3.8

Upon the shore I hear
The Moon's great orchestra
The stars a distant choir
As you command this constant ebb and flow
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Tom Billsborough
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Annette Aitken 31 August 2016

I could feel the tranquility within this poem....feeling sleepy now....I found it so relaxing.... Annette

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Tom Billsborough 31 August 2016

Yes, I think a moonlit sea is very relaxing especially with the waves lapping against the rocks and sand. Thanks, Annette.

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Valsa George 29 August 2016

Moon inspires poets to burst into poetry! Enjoyed this great orchestra conducted by the moon and the stars.....!

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Tom Billsborough 29 August 2016

Yes, Valsa, the moon and the sea both produce a great variety of images. Together they are even more magical!

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 22 August 2016

You the best Tom, the moon must be smiling and winking at you. Upon the shore I hear The Moon's great orchestra The stars a distant choir Your Moon's music is more greater than my, The Moon tale! Am hopping you can visit it and confirm that! Have my 10!

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Tom Billsborough 22 August 2016

Dear Zwelethu Thank you. I shall look at your poems in a few minutes. Just having a coffee break! see you soon Tom

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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