Saturday, July 13, 2013

Moon's Lullaby (Berceuse De La Lune) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Hiding wide blue
Dark breath taking over the sky
Hushing on face of the night
Though day wont be so dark
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COMMENTS
Mj Lemon 16 April 2019

The light of thr moon as the hope of light's coming. But you also make us think that the moon itself gives us light, hope, expectations, desires. it is a light in the dark. The moon- not to be overlooked. This is a gem, Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 March 2018

Shine in the darkness of your heart Like sparkling stars inside Though it can't be bright as day light It wont deny the beauty we had..............yes, so true. Beautiful poem with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Jacqui Broad 25 June 2016

now i know what i feel when i sometimes sit alone in the middle of the night, looking at de la lune ....yes, you have captured the mood very well.....the loneliness and mystery of nature only a poet as great as you can understand ....

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Jodie Hardy 27 August 2013

Beautiful writing, just wonderful, Thak you for sharing x x

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Khairul Ahsan 14 August 2013

Thanks for dedicating the poem to all of us. It's a nice poem. Moon has charmed poets and lovers through ages and inspired them to write and love beautifully. Thanks to all the fellow poets who shared their thoughts and appreciations here. Special thanks to Diane Hine for giving some useful information about our moon here.

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Beach Girl 14 August 2013

Absolutely beautiful! You are definitely one of the better poets on this site. Loved your notes about your poem also.

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Terry O'leary 13 August 2013

The moon is movement... as is your poem, Soul... very nice... Terry

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Poet's Fan 12 August 2013

moon's lullaby, , any lullaby is nostalgic,

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Yasmin Khan 12 August 2013

The moon enchanted you to sing such a tuneful song, lovely write dear Soul Yasmin

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Neela Nath Das 11 August 2013

I loved the images of this poem.It's happening before my eyes, so cinematic! And for the theme? Oh! Hope is the thing in which I love to sleep and dream.I'm alive, because hope allows me to live.Beautiful soul in a word!

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 27 July 2013

beautiful with amazing imagery really enjoyed to read it thanks for sharing

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 July 2013

Shine in the darkness of your heart Like sparkling stars inside. wonderful poem my friend, you are a the brightest star man. Siya_! !

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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 July 2013

A great moon rhapsody in write.. Try Moonsong whan you have a spare couple of minutes..

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Rekha Mandagere 21 July 2013

My lullaby is truly yours child though I am bit late for the Big day celebrations! God bless you forever. Long live: -)

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 20 July 2013

This poem reminds me the galaxy, every good things. And this holy month.

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Dinesan Madathil 19 July 2013

A poem with soul of its own, dear Soul. When you are like the all pervasive Moon over the PH, who am I perhaps of your stars dim and far from the earth of realities? This poem reflects upon the dark domains of a mind the light of a Moon dear to all.

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Hazel Durham 18 July 2013

Beautiful, mesmerizing with great imagery!

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Patricia Grantham 17 July 2013

A very romantic poem about the moon.The moon casts it's shadows all through the night. Most of the time it lights up the skies except when half, quarter or on a starry night. Good write. Please read my poem Diamonds in the Sky.

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Valerie Dohren 16 July 2013

A great philosophy Soul, beautiful poem.

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Nader Baheri 16 July 2013

we all shine like the moon and the stars and the sun.this poem reminds me a statement by Mark Twain.he said: (every one is like moon.we all have darker side but we may never show it to anybody) but i think the ones who show their darker side are really brave and honest to show their dark side. about this poem i say yes this is so clear and easy to understand.it gives me lot of hopes.a fine poem dear _soul personally to me it does have lot of meanings ~nb

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