Night is stygian sans of stars
Dark mood shares kinship
With black sky of new moon
Moon's jubilant child I am shedding
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A brilliant little work on nature! I read your recent poem...a poem of value and great substance but unfortunately I couldn't place my comment there because you have closed your comment box for that specific poem!
Moon's jubilant child I am shedding The gloom under full moon's glow-- Shedding the gloom. lovely. tony
New moon in black sky shines with wonderful hopes. Dark mood shares kinship. The brilliance of poetic mind is perfectly expressed in this poem. Reading this poem once more I feel very happy.
Night is staying far away from but with stars. Night is singing and dancing. Lord Krishna is moon for us as we chant his name. He is gracious. He is affectionate. Hare Krishna, Hare Krishna, my moon bestows grace to you! ...10+
Dark mood shares kinship and in the dark night moon shines with silvery smiley face. The gloom under full moon motivates mind. A great natural imagery is drawn from this poem. This is interestingly penned.10
Dark mood shares kinship With black sky of new moon Thank you Savithaji. A kinship effect is felt between our melancholy mood and New moon night. Great
A brilliant nature write in its simplicity. Superb imagery. It captures the moon's influence on people's moods.10++
Moon's jubilant child I am shedding The gloom under full moon's glow
This little poem always provides me a unique pleasure! Night is stygian sans of stars...love the expression...I like alliteration! My great pleasure reading it time and again! Stay always blessed dear madam!
It's a lovely little poem! .....Moon's jubilant child I am shedding The gloom under full moon's glow....I love the expression! Thanks dear madam for sharing....10
''Moon's jubilant child I am shedding The gloom under full moon's glow '' - these two verses are so poetical! This little poem has a special charm of its own! Loved it!
I love Moon poems especially this one..
There are so many poems on moon or related to this but it is a special one which is called unique. It is a beautiful poem on nature with haunting expression. Thank u dear Savita madam for posting such a gem.10
On the corpus of this beautiful poem, I wish you happy new year dear madam...stay blessed by the bless of God