Monday, September 29, 2014

Moon's Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

Night is stygian sans of stars
Dark mood shares kinship
With black sky of new moon
Moon's jubilant child I am shedding
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Savita Tyagi
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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 January 2022

On the corpus of this beautiful poem, I wish you happy new year dear madam...stay blessed by the bless of God

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2021

Revisiting... magnificent poem!

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Varsha M 01 February 2021

Moon's child makes it brilliant bright once again.

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Varsha M 01 February 2021

Moon sans stars is dull indeed

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 January 2021

A brilliant little work on nature! I read your recent poem...a poem of value and great substance but unfortunately I couldn't place my comment there because you have closed your comment box for that specific poem!

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Dr. Antony Theodore 03 January 2021

Moon's jubilant child I am shedding The gloom under full moon's glow-- Shedding the gloom. lovely. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 June 2020

New moon in black sky shines with wonderful hopes. Dark mood shares kinship. The brilliance of poetic mind is perfectly expressed in this poem. Reading this poem once more I feel very happy.

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Budhashaya Behera 07 February 2020

Night is staying far away from but with stars. Night is singing and dancing. Lord Krishna is moon for us as we chant his name. He is gracious. He is affectionate. Hare Krishna, Hare Krishna, my moon bestows grace to you! ...10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2019

Dark mood shares kinship and in the dark night moon shines with silvery smiley face. The gloom under full moon motivates mind. A great natural imagery is drawn from this poem. This is interestingly penned.10

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Prabir Gayen 16 January 2019

Very sweet one...fine poetry..... thanks

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Dark mood shares kinship With black sky of new moon Thank you Savithaji. A kinship effect is felt between our melancholy mood and New moon night. Great

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 August 2018

A brilliant nature write in its simplicity. Superb imagery. It captures the moon's influence on people's moods.10++

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Britte Ninad 02 June 2018

nice words- nexus with the moon or nature nice 10++

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 May 2018

Moon's jubilant child I am shedding The gloom under full moon's glow

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 May 2018

This little poem always provides me a unique pleasure! Night is stygian sans of stars...love the expression...I like alliteration! My great pleasure reading it time and again! Stay always blessed dear madam!

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Bipasha D 15 March 2018

Loved this relationship with moon. Goes into my poem list :)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 February 2018

It's a lovely little poem! .....Moon's jubilant child I am shedding The gloom under full moon's glow....I love the expression! Thanks dear madam for sharing....10

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 January 2018

''Moon's jubilant child I am shedding The gloom under full moon's glow '' - these two verses are so poetical! This little poem has a special charm of its own! Loved it!

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I love Moon poems especially this one..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2017

There are so many poems on moon or related to this but it is a special one which is called unique. It is a beautiful poem on nature with haunting expression. Thank u dear Savita madam for posting such a gem.10

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