Friday, December 20, 2013

Moon River Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am reminded
Again,
Of a first chance
To dance
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Richard Theze
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Dr Antony Theodore 24 August 2018

So much Was Left unsaid Undone........ chances, love, forgone days. memories living always in the inner core of the brain...... lovely poem my dear poet Richard.. tony

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M Asim Nehal 30 November 2015

First love and Lost love are very difficult to erase from sweet memory, Very well composed poem, I liked it...10+++

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Pamela Sinicrope 18 October 2015

I like this wistful poem about potential (in romance) that was never realized. It makes you think 'What if? '.... The imagery of the'rainbow's end' opposed to me is good choice...as well as opposing sides of the same river... Well done and deftly written. I especially like this one...

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Richard Thézé 18 October 2015

Her name was Sharon; she was 13 and I was 17. We danced to Moon River at a party and kissed. Her parents prevented us from seeing one another again. I was recently contacted by her sister on Facebook and we are in touch again after 40 years. Ironically, the age difference doesn't matter anymore.

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Sranisha Francis 24 September 2015

As the moon Slipped away And the music Played on. Very good words.....................

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Richard Theze

Richard Theze

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