Saturday, February 7, 2009

Moon Patterns Comments

Rating: 3.7

The moon makes patterns on my floor,
leaf-edged and almost still.

The thick blanket of night silence cushions
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Diana van den Berg
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Akhtar Jawad 14 September 2019

Perhaps you still remember your daughter, settled in Australia and you love her. A nice poem coming out from your subconscious.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 22 September 2016

Diana, I love this delicate poem! Funny how the moon inspires poetry. I wrote one last full moon, and so did another member.

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Yelena M. 23 March 2009

A truly mesmerising read, Diana! The first lines take into the mystery of the Moon and hold the heart and mind till the end of the poem. A wonderful ode for the Night! Best wishes. A.

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Laurie Hill 13 February 2009

Lovely imagery, an intriguing write.

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Sicelo Sithole 13 February 2009

This is trully inspirational. can i have more of your poems, eight is not enough for me. the writting is beautiful. I am sure that you are or were a poetry teacher at once..lol.

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Haiku Haiku 08 February 2009

Most worthy of a ten. Great atmospheric feel to this one.

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Dear Diana This is such a strong poem, the moon's pull bringing not only patterns but an eerie feel to the night. Your imagery is outstandingly vivid and the two lines in the beginning used again at the end round up the whole work with aplomb. Excellent work! Karin Anderson

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Diana van den Berg

Diana van den Berg

Durban, South Africa
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