Moon Of The Fourteenth Comments

a lovely romantic write...the sun and moon switching places

Sincerely...this one oozes with radiance of pure romance....and sensuality! ! ! ! !

'We wrote our name on the stars Not for luck but for us to remember' Great poem- great imagery- but- But at the end there is tear shed- touching 10 for this excellent presentation.

very nice and romance filled inflamable lines.... very low kindling temp...be careful... cheers

Yea, you were out of 'tune', may be you restore your style back, you are good in duets, in accompaniment..there you specialise, and a very friendly, ; loving partner..))) This is an excellent piece.10 plus, Reshma.