moon, moon, crazy moon
natural moon
torn apart and snoozing moon;
lovely moon, romantic moon
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Beautiful sonorous train of thought, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
Our very own earth's moon! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
'torn apart and snoozing moon' mooning here over a few of your lines, one of the most original lunar imagery poems I have ever read
Stream of consciousness... I personally place them near the level of rambling ' an old woman hag of a moon ' hehe! lol. Very creative. I like it.
Stream of consciousness... I personally place them near the level of rambling
' an old woman hag of a moon ' hehe! lol. Very creative. I like it.
just love this poem..............great to read the forms and lines, it sparks my mind! ! ! 10+++++++++
Amazing I really like it