Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, August 9, 2012

Moon May Not Be Seen Comments

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Moon may not be seen any more
Once upon a time we praised and adored her
In full lime light and show as gorgeous
She had become over night famous
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2012

Elzbieta Kry.. beautiful.... and sad.....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2012

SPLENDID dason good attempt, all the best to you my dear

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2012

Dilene Maia Hello Have an wonderful saturday, hugs& kisses

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

Re: Moon may not be seen (Score: 1) by rondo on Friday, August 10,2012 (10: 13: 29) either you are speaking in metaphors or just not plain enough for the average schmuck to follow...But I know this is intended to be a social write and you at least attempted to rhyme witch is more than most of the slugs on site.....nice effort

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

Harindhar Reddy Your poems are getting better and better, Hope to talk to one to one. When u r here ping me! 30 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

Tribhawan Kaul Too sad for Fiza alias Anuradha Bali. We don't know how many Fiza's are still out there. Recently one more lady Geetika Sharma commited suicide because of one Minister Madu Kanda. I treat this poem as a tribute to Fiza. May her soul rest in peace.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2012

Moon may not be seen any more Once upon a time we praised and adored her

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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