Sunday, March 4, 2007

Moon Lit Goddess Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are such sweetness in my mouth.
And a touching tenderness at my fingertips,
with an enchantment of scent that makes my senses real,
and reel with their heady intoxication of; just you.
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David Taylor
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Michelle Tiddy 20 March 2007

What a beautiful piece, filled with love and respect and amazement and wonder. Loved it!

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Malini Kadir 12 March 2007

Wow is this also you? ? this is a work of man..................head over heels in love! Savouring, his grace.....................is it? who is the lady who inspired it or is it a fragment of imagination.....................Wonderful! !

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Delilah Miller 11 March 2007

If only all guys could make a girl sound and feel like that, we just might have world peace and love. Gorgeous poem, deserves to be right up along 'Lovesong' by Ted Hughes. Xs and Os, Colette

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Lynda Robson 06 March 2007

This is lovely David, if someone ever described me this way, well............. who knows, excellent, well worth a 10, best wishes Lynda xx

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Original Unknown Girl 05 March 2007

Stunning! ! This is most definitely one of your best David, I loved it, so romantic, so eloquent and yes Dee might well be right! ! ! Well Done, HG: -) xx

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Dee Daffodil 04 March 2007

David...you know your wish to write something that all might remember....well...this might just be it! ! What a marvellous piece of poetry David! ! Bravo...Bravo...Bravo! ! ! Hugs, Dee

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Trade Martin 04 March 2007

David, nice write....! ! ! Best, T.M..

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