You are such sweetness in my mouth.
And a touching tenderness at my fingertips,
with an enchantment of scent that makes my senses real,
and reel with their heady intoxication of; just you.
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Wow is this also you? ? this is a work of man..................head over heels in love! Savouring, his grace.....................is it? who is the lady who inspired it or is it a fragment of imagination.....................Wonderful! !
If only all guys could make a girl sound and feel like that, we just might have world peace and love. Gorgeous poem, deserves to be right up along 'Lovesong' by Ted Hughes. Xs and Os, Colette
This is lovely David, if someone ever described me this way, well............. who knows, excellent, well worth a 10, best wishes Lynda xx
Stunning! ! This is most definitely one of your best David, I loved it, so romantic, so eloquent and yes Dee might well be right! ! ! Well Done, HG: -) xx
David...you know your wish to write something that all might remember....well...this might just be it! ! What a marvellous piece of poetry David! ! Bravo...Bravo...Bravo! ! ! Hugs, Dee
What a beautiful piece, filled with love and respect and amazement and wonder. Loved it!