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I woke up with my Ka on a Spring day,
no longer delirious, no longer asleep,
I analyze creation in a quest to better
understand my surroundings, life is our
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thanks buddy, it really means a lot, and I am glad that you were able to see the thoughts and their true intentions
The preachers say, "we weep for the non-believers. For, they will be denied their entry to heaven." Here just the contrary. An atheist crying for the believers. Nice juxtapositioning. Ingenious.5 *s
thanks buddy, it means a lot... but the line about the upper skies could also be seen as the heavenly skies too... which is also causing the poet to weep for the believers too as a result of his personal experiences with the heavenly skies...lol
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7/21/2025 10:05:04 AM # 1.0.0
Very good
thank you for reading and for the feedback, I really appreciate and value it.