Sunday, December 7, 2014

Moon Just Tell Me Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tearing the wrapper of the mist
You have come out near my house.
Tell me, just tell me the cause,
Behind your blissful emergence.
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Neela Nath Das
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Rajesh Thankappan 01 January 2015

A enchanting poem indeed. To answer Sina, I infer, the moon is tormented since unlike the stars it is lonely and has no eligible celestial companion.

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Sina Farajzadeh 18 December 2014

Hi. A nice poem in the romantic mood. Good luck Why moon's heart is tormented? That arose in my mind. And I like that.

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Sina Farajzadeh 18 December 2014

Hi. A nice poem in the romantic mood. Good luck Why moon's heart is tormented? That arouse in my mind. And I like that.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 December 2014

Beautiful poem wonderfully started - Tearing the wrapper of the mist You have come out near my house. so beautiful thanks for share

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2014

Moon you have come near my house tearing the wrapper of mist makes this more attractive and wonderful. Very strong and beautiful imagery makes this special.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2014

A sweet imagery. Moon just tell me will you Stay at my hut to add quietness Or to share the narration of Your tormented heart!

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