Moon In The Window Comments

'white light on darkened land' indeed the moon is a vision of comfort on a lonely dark night... and thanks to the heavens we are never really left in total darkness....

beautiful through out..but beauty initself looses its charm so the last line delivers the impact....and it becomes majestic...

You have eulogised the peace and stillness of the night in this lovely poem...10

written very nice regards sandhya

You capture the stillness and peace of the night and form into art..10

this is a kind of poem that gives the needed tranquility to the reader friend.. very soothing poem.. a great refreshment..thanks10+= with love shan

The peace, the calm of night, entranced by moonbeams.....lovely poem. 10++

I particularly like these two lines: Imprinted its clone On window glass. Good use of modern going ons.

Your poem creates a certain dreamy and elusive atmosphere that is associated for me with art works by impressionists. It has a quality to seduce a reader with colour and escape at the same time somewhere into darkness(or whiteness depending on a state of mind of a reader) .If to recite it, it also brings an interesting sonic experience reminding of 'sound waves' in 'Claire de Lune' by Claude Debussy. Thanks for sharing, Sameer :) A.

Glorious poem Sameer. Beautiful imagery and I too feet the peace that other poets talk of too! 10 Karin Anderson

Superb Sameer, I have a calmness coming over me too from that moon in the window- lovely imagery

Sublime poem! I love it!

wow! a calm beauty of the past entangle in your poetic words of immortality a beautiful piece of all time.... a 10 +++++

very peaceful i like it,10

tides of calmness rose as i heeded- lovely, this is what happens when we tune to nature. very beautifully expressed love' Mamta

A very nice way of passing unto another person the feeling of calmness amidst a stressful day. So simple yet a moving poem. Way to go!

Fine picturesque of the moon in the window...........10/10

This has a lovely warm feel - - it is a well thought out verse with considerable imagery....10 from Fay

powerful words great poem 10

The picturesque images you have made set a beautiful mood. I can imagine it all as you have painted this lovely poem so well. 10 Karin Anderson