Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Moon Enchanting Comments

Rating: 5.0

When suddenly the clouds
Covered the face
Of moon enchanting
My heart sank
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Jahan Zeb
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Wahab Abdul 04 June 2013

ah! the moon, very enchanting and the night is very soothing, very lovely....love it....10

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David Wood 01 June 2013

Very personal and emotional write. I like it

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Captain Cur 31 May 2013

Very emotional write with a strong personal finish.

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Dave Walker 30 May 2013

A very beautiful poem, a wonderful write.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 May 2013

A fascinatin poem pennd in a sublime way, enjoyable to read. I luv d moon so how u drew d analogy sounds real fine. Pls do read my latest poem too.

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Farah Ilyas 29 May 2013

Enchanting moon is always there to accompany you, sometimes just play hide & seek to see your worth for that, but it doesn't mean that moon is away from you, moon exists in your heart, feel it.....great poem with a great use of metaphor moon..have deep sorrow inside: -(

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Unwritten Soul 29 May 2013

Moon can away from you....just sometimes in a phase of hardness, you will never find a month without a shine from it....hold it my words, and you will know the enchanting moon always there_Soul

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 May 2013

beautiful poem about moon ....nice poem

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Malakand Pakistan
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