Thursday, June 6, 2013

Moon, Don'T You Miss Me? Comments

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Oh cruel clouds,
Don’t come between me and my moon,
If not to rain, why to disturb?

Oh, my moon, my love
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Ambrosia Ambrosia
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Heather Wilkins 25 June 2013

if only we could own the moon. lovely write

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 June 2013

Sun and Moon Give us light One is bright And the other is light You can fly in the moonlight Because you and your poem Are bright in the moon light

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Unwritten Soul 11 June 2013

Woooooooow, such a romantic poetry, well if moon loves you no matter how thick cloud cover the face of it sphere, it still remember you through its light....maybe you just miss the moon a lot...very beautiful and nice poem Ambrosia! ! _Soul

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Ellen Mendez 10 June 2013

what a lovely poem :) , , , .......i like it..., , , , , , , , , i wish we can own something and lack it in ourselves so that it wont go away :) ..........

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Captain Cur 09 June 2013

Sensitive write, Nothing is impossible. You own the moon in this sweet poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 June 2013

my love, don't disappear again and again, good one, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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