Moon Blooms In Lotus (Light Within Beauty) Comments

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Great Devotional poem adorned with the beautiful picture of Ritu Didi........ 💛🧡💚🧡💛

Top to bottom is madness deep / Beauty beyond mortal to grip. On the railing you are standing / Like overhanging grapes of vine, Amorous bards will feel deep pain.... //.... This Lovely portrayal reminds me of a couple of dazzling examples of romantic Urdu Poetry. The poem reflects the intensity of passionate feelings. Thanks for sharing.

A lovely poem, Prabir.........10++++++++++

A wonderful imaginative write. Great imagery.

A ball of fire; goddess of Love, Honey-clad eyes with Dream-full face, Amorous bards will feel deep pain, The gleaming light that spreads around, Will Pierce the sky of hidden mind. Ripples of joy out of dream stretches, Within and without my being deep. In the deep shore of heart you live, Like a small wave of love and strain,

PART3. A ball of fire; goddess of Love, Honey-clad eyes with Dream-full face, Amorous bards will feel deep pain, The gleaming light that spreads around, Will Pierce the sky of hidden mind. Ripples of joy out of dream stretches, Within and without my being deep. In the deep shore of heart you live, Like a small wave of love and strain,

PART 3. A ball of fire; goddess of Love, Honey-clad eyes with Dreamfull face, Amorous bards will feel deep pain, The gleaming light that spreads around, Will Pierce the sky of hidden mind. Ripples of joy out of dream stretches, Within and without my being deep. In the deep shore of heart you live, Like a small wave of love and strain,

PART 3. Your bosom touch the sky Joyous. A ball of fire; goddess of Love, Honey-clad eyes with Dream full face, Amorous bards will feel deep pain, The gleaming light that spreads around, Will Pierce the sky of hidden mind. Ripples of joy out of dream stretches, Within and without my being deep. In the deep shore of heart you live, Like a small wave of love and strain,

PART 2. In the deep shore of heart you live, Like a small wave of love and strain, The Moon of spiritual growth, Top to bottom is madness deep, Beauty beyond mortal to grip You are an amazing sweetheart Your bosom touch the sky Joyous.

You intended perhaps a SPIRITUAL POEM BUT anyone will see the inner core of your mind now as SEXUAL so change or delete the ''spiritual'' word and see how love transforms you into a poet 'I'D LIKE TO SEE in you and by now hope you knew.... In the deep shore of heart you live, Like a small wave of love and strain,